HATE the voice over. It detracts in most instances and only marginally enhances in others. I can't believe that a gun-toting, whipcrack of a heroine like this would have this sort of "voice" in her inner monologue. The narration is meant to sound important and artistic and that's precisely why it doesn't work. The action camerawork could be a bit better, but the storyline moves well and the production design is well thought out. It's a good location and could look especially creepy at night.
I'll say check it out.